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CookiesForBreakfast
08-01-2010, 01:35 AM
--Day 1--
I was woken up around 2:00 in the morning last night. There was a sound being heard from my closet. Feeling a little scared, I did not want to open it, but my natural curiosity blinded my feelings of hesitation and fear. I placed my hand on the handle and slowly began to pull it open....

--Day 2--
Upon sliding open my closet door, the darkness in my room seemed to be completely lit by sunshine when compared to what erupted from my closet. A darkness that would only exist in the most remotest place of the universe spawned from inside that harbinger of emptiness. Upon being encased in complete darkness, I saw it seep out from my closet. It was the only thing that I could see in my room and I felt as if my heart was sinking to the bottom of the darkest depths of the sea. As it approached me closer, it began to...

--Day 3--

suck away every bit of happiness that still managed to survive the encounter with this... thing. I fell backwards and landed on the floor. All I could remember seeing was this dark shroud crawling over me until I blacked out completely. I am not sure how long I was out, but when my eyes opened up, I was in a place like no other. I managed to stand up and I tried to figure out where I was, but it was completely black. The walls were rocky and I assumed I must have been in a cave. It was very quiet and so I tried to figure out how to get out of this place before that thing that brought me here returned. I used the walls to feel my way around and I traveled for at least an hour through complete darkness. Some of the corridors were so small that I had to crawl through them. The sick feeling that was quickly growing every single minute I was in this cave finally vanished as I saw the bright rays of the sun piercing through the darkness. Being renewed with hope, I ran towards the light until I finally made my way out of the cave. What I saw upon my escape was a place like no other.

--Day 4--

I appeared in a room that resembled a changing room of some sort. I saw a few lockers, which had a purse, a gas mask, and some other stuff. There was also another locker filled with crates of ammunition and first aid kits. Upon approaching the locker, it swung open and almost broke my nose, but I did feel a lot better. The tiredness in my legs from my trek through the cave just seemed to go away. I was also no longer hungry, thirsty, and I felt like I had a good meal and a full nights sleep. Feeling completely renewed, I decided to explore my surroundings. I started heading out, but after I took a few steps I heard a noise behind me. It sounded like a man was eating something because all I heard was a loud, "nom nom nom!" After turning back to see where the sound was coming from, I saw a rather large man dressed in a black and blue outfit. "Sandvich make me strong!" he yelled, tossing the toothpick onto the floor. He looked at me, pointed, and yelled, "Go go go!" After pushing me aside, he slowly ran out of the room and stood towards a gate. This was not the quiet place I had thought I was taken to, it was quite the opposite. Suddenly, more more and people started appearing in the locker behind me. They just kept appearing and crowding around the gate. A few seconds later, I saw more people appearing, but these were people dressed in red and some stood just outside of the gate. Just as I was trying to make sense of my surroundings, I heard a voice of a woman that felt as if she was all around me. "Mission begins in thirty seconds," she calmly said...

--Day 5--

"What does she mean, 'mission begins in thirty seconds?'" I asked the other people dressed in blue. "We are killlers!" yelled the fat man. A smaller man had also spoke, yelling "Ataaack!" The woman spoke again, "Mission begins in 10 seconds." My heart was beating so hard that I thought it was trying to break out of my chest. I saw spiked ball-like things being placed at the gate as the woman had spoken to us again, "Mission begins in 5... 4... 3... 2... 1..." The gates slid open and in an instant I saw three people get blown up and their body parts flew all over the place. The head of a scrawny fellow landed right by my feet and I was so horrified that I fell down to the floor in shock. The large man I had met earlier walked up to me and said in his loud and commanding voice, "Waghhh! Waghhh! Cry some more!" He started laughing at me, but he grew silent in an instant and I saw that there was a small blood filled hole in his forehead and he soon fell down onto the ground. I was plunged into the middle of a war zone and I had no idea how to get out or what was going on. Everyone was dying around me and it must be only a matter of seconds before they would come after me. It was only a few seconds until I saw that same exact giant man walking right passed me. "He just died," I thought. "Were these people even human?" I had so many questions with no answers, but it seemed this woman I kept hearing must be the one in charge. I knew that if I could just find her, maybe she could get me out of this place, but where could she be? Just as I was lost in my thoughts, I was caught up in a group of blue-dressed people and pushed out of the gate. I had never been in such great fear for my life until the moment I stepped out onto this battlefield. Rockets were flying, fire was being shot out by these demented looking maniacs, and people were dying all around me. I hid behind a rock and I thought I was safe, but then I heard this laughter that felt like it was right behind me. I looked, but I saw no one. It wasn't until I looked behind me again that I saw a scrawny looking baseball player dressed in blue. He kept shouting, "Medic! MEDIC!" I just ignored him and continued hiding. A one-eyed blue man walked next to me and stopped. He quickly yelled, "The scout's a bloody traitor!" He fired his weapon and the scout blew up right next to me, but as I turned to see, all I saw were pieces of a red man in a suit and a fedora hat. The demoman looked at me and yelled, "Get going!" He grabbed my arm and dragged me to this wagon carrying a bomb that some other blue people were surrounding. I tried to get away, but I was surrounded and could not push my way out of the group. They started pushing the cart and all kinds of weapons were being fired in our direction...

--Day 6--

Continued tomorrow...

Link
08-01-2010, 02:09 AM
I'm interested...

Fishboy
08-01-2010, 02:20 AM
I was woken up around 2:00 in the morning last night. There was a sound being heard from my closet. Feeling a little scared, I did not want to open it, but my natural curiosity blinded my feelings of hesitation and fear. I placed my hand on the handle and slowly began to pull it open...

and then i facestabbed you...the end

themuddaload
08-01-2010, 10:25 AM
this guy popped out? http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b336/dmcme/cookiecrisp.jpg

CookiesForBreakfast
08-01-2010, 02:18 PM
I was woken up around 2:00 in the morning last night. There was a sound being heard from my closet. Feeling a little scared, I did not want to open it, but my natural curiosity blinded my feelings of hesitation and fear. I placed my hand on the handle and slowly began to pull it open....

Upon sliding open my closet door, the darkness in my room seemed to be completely lit by sunshine when compared to what erupted from my closet. A darkness that would only exist in the most remotest place of the universe spawned from inside that harbinger of emptiness. Upon being encased in complete darkness, I saw it seep out from my closet. It was the only thing that I could see in my room and I felt as if my heart was sinking to the bottom of the darkest depths of the sea. As it approached me closer, it began to... (continued tomorrow) :)

themuddaload
08-01-2010, 03:08 PM
D:

Link
08-01-2010, 03:13 PM
the suspense is killing me cookies

CookiesForBreakfast
08-01-2010, 03:20 PM
That's the point! :D

CookiesForBreakfast
08-02-2010, 03:12 AM
I was woken up around 2:00 in the morning last night. There was a sound being heard from my closet. Feeling a little scared, I did not want to open it, but my natural curiosity blinded my feelings of hesitation and fear. I placed my hand on the handle and slowly began to pull it open....

Upon sliding open my closet door, the darkness in my room seemed to be completely lit by sunshine when compared to what erupted from my closet. A darkness that would only exist in the most remotest place of the universe spawned from inside that harbinger of emptiness. Upon being encased in complete darkness, I saw it seep out from my closet. It was the only thing that I could see in my room and I felt as if my heart was sinking to the bottom of the darkest depths of the sea. As it approached me closer, it began to...

suck away every bit of happiness that still managed to survive the encounter with this... thing. I fell backwards and landed on the floor. All I could remember seeing was this dark shroud crawling over me until I blacked out completely. I am not sure how long I was out, but when my eyes awoke I was in a place like no other. I managed stand up and I tried to figure out where I was, but it was completely black. The walls were rocky and I assumed I must have been in a cave. It was very quiet and so I tried to figure out how to get out of this place. I used the walls to feel my way around and I traveled for at least an hour through complete darkness. Some of the corridors were so small that I had to crawl through them. The sick feeling that was quickly growing every single minute I was in this cave finally vanished as I saw the bright rays of the sun piercing through the darkness. Being renewed with hope, I ran towards the light until I finally made my way out of the cave. What I saw upon my escape was a place like no other...

(continued tomorrow)

MeGaMoNk
08-02-2010, 07:56 AM
It was a dementor....use the patronis spell! =^)

Kevin<3
08-02-2010, 10:26 AM
It's a spy

Cosmic_Shame
08-02-2010, 10:33 AM
sounds like something from Kingdom Hearts Cookies

Djinn
08-02-2010, 10:58 AM
i was thinking it was a dementor also :3

CookiesForBreakfast
08-02-2010, 03:14 PM
I have never played Kingdom Hearts, so I don't know how the story goes. :O

heiny
08-03-2010, 11:58 PM
Wow you're pretty bad at finishing stories. You started it the 1st and your "tomorrow" has turned into never. vapo-story haehahehaehhaeh

CookiesForBreakfast
08-04-2010, 12:10 AM
I still have 4 more hours and for your information, I'm continuing it righ tnow!

CookiesForBreakfast
08-04-2010, 12:19 AM
--Day 1--
I was woken up around 2:00 in the morning last night. There was a sound being heard from my closet. Feeling a little scared, I did not want to open it, but my natural curiosity blinded my feelings of hesitation and fear. I placed my hand on the handle and slowly began to pull it open....

--Day 2--
Upon sliding open my closet door, the darkness in my room seemed to be completely lit by sunshine when compared to what erupted from my closet. A darkness that would only exist in the most remotest place of the universe spawned from inside that harbinger of emptiness. Upon being encased in complete darkness, I saw it seep out from my closet. It was the only thing that I could see in my room and I felt as if my heart was sinking to the bottom of the darkest depths of the sea. As it approached me closer, it began to...

--Day 3--

suck away every bit of happiness that still managed to survive the encounter with this... thing. I fell backwards and landed on the floor. All I could remember seeing was this dark shroud crawling over me until I blacked out completely. I am not sure how long I was out, but when my eyes opened up, I was in a place like no other. I managed to stand up and I tried to figure out where I was, but it was completely black. The walls were rocky and I assumed I must have been in a cave. It was very quiet and so I tried to figure out how to get out of this place before that thing that brought me here returned. I used the walls to feel my way around and I traveled for at least an hour through complete darkness. Some of the corridors were so small that I had to crawl through them. The sick feeling that was quickly growing every single minute I was in this cave finally vanished as I saw the bright rays of the sun piercing through the darkness. Being renewed with hope, I ran towards the light until I finally made my way out of the cave. What I saw upon my escape was a place like no other.

--Day 4--

I appeared in a room that resembled a changing room of some sort. I saw a few lockers, which had a purse, a gas mask, and some other stuff. "What is this stuff for?" I thought. There was also another locker filled with crates of ammunition and first aid kits. Upon approaching the locker, it swung open and almost broke my nose, but I did feel a lot better. The tiredness in my legs from my trek through the cave just seemed to go away. I was also no longer hungry, thirsty, and I felt like I had a good meal and a full nights sleep. Feeling completely renewed, I decided to explore my surroundings. I started heading out, but after I took a few steps I heard a noise behind me. It sounded like a man was eating something because all I heard was a loud, "nom nom nom!" After turning back to see where the sound was coming from, I saw a rather large man dressed in a black and blue outfit. He was rather large and carried a giant weapon on his back. "Sandvich make me strong!" he yelled, tossing the toothpick onto the floor. He looked at me, pointed, and yelled, "Go go go!" After pushing me aside, he slowly ran out of the room and stood towards a gate. This was not the quiet place I had thought I was taken to, it was quite the opposite. Suddenly, more more and people started appearing in the locker behind me. They just kept appearing and crowding around the gate. A few seconds later, I saw more people appearing, but these were people dressed in red and some stood just outside of the gate. Just as I was trying to make sense of my surroundings, I heard a voice of a woman from all around me. "Mission begins in thirty seconds," she calmly said...

--Day 5--

Continued tomorrow..

heiny
08-04-2010, 12:24 AM
omgggggggggggggggggg

This is straight out of Makaveli's Citadel. www.planetfortress.com archived stories. His remains unfinished to this day, but maybe thats on purpose.

I like yours too so far :3 just needs prodding.

CookiesForBreakfast
08-04-2010, 12:25 AM
I added a little more since you last read it, heiny. I also do not know what that story is like, either. This is just out of my own head. :P

heiny
08-04-2010, 12:28 AM
I read the story and then posted. I like where its going. Its awesome that you had this idea too. I hope you go far with it.

CookiesForBreakfast
08-04-2010, 12:29 AM
Thanks. I like writing stories. :P

heiny
08-04-2010, 12:36 AM
Sorry it was Moriarty. check it out

themuddaload
08-04-2010, 12:03 PM
beware teh tf2 monstar! D:

CookiesForBreakfast
08-04-2010, 10:31 PM
updated on the front page :)

heiny
09-13-2010, 06:18 AM
--Day 44--
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